ABM Feedback- Art as a Global Human Activity

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It is wrote by Jonathan handˇ

When I went to office and Jonathan asked me :[Are you all right??] Then I answered :[ Yep!!! but nerves, worry~] Jonathan is very good he told my object is interesting but language is a big problem. Thanks Jonathan teaching Chinese student 50 years, so he knew what was my paper wrote about.

Everyone is worry their mark!!
I think most Chinese like mark more then  improvement in the course.

Link to my work: Show of Perspective on Art as a Global Human Activity